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Kenichiro Nakamura PRO

1 year ago

Hi all!

Architecture is one of my favorite genres, but my skills are not good enough.

So before sending the image to curation, I want to get your feedback.

This is the Sony Building in Ginza, Tokyo where I took the image from the front.

There are several concerns I have:

- Synmmetricity: I tried to capture the building from the center, but I couldn't. As a result, the image is not perfectly symmetric.

- Edit: I tried to remove some lights behind the window so as not to disturb the viewers, but I am not sure about the quality. Do you see any flaws?

- Distortion: I had to take a picture from the ground by looking up the building. But I want to edit it as if it looks from the same level, and the distortion is quite big. I myself consider the distortion to add more originality to the building, but want to hear your opinion.

Any additional feedback is appreciated!

Udo Dittmann PRO

1 year ago

Hi Kenichiro,

I took the liberty of creating perfect symmetry by mirroring the right-hand side and inserting it on the left. So that you don't notice it immediately, I edited a few prominent points with the Clone Tool.

Greetings

Udo

Kenichiro Nakamura PRO

1 year ago

Udo

Wow, that I never think about before!!!!!! I actually prefer the right side of the building so that's perfect. Let me try it in my side a well!!

Udo Dittmann PRO

1 year ago

one more thing ...

imo you use a non standard crop format - perhaps you should crop the image to 1:1 format?

Greetings

Udo

Theo Luycx PRO

1 year ago

Kenichiro,

Only two other suggestions. For me a better balance in your composition. I used in camera raw OPTICS>DISTORTION to become better horizontals below. And above I made a selection of the upper part and gave a new filling layer blue 14% covering. Theo L.