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Portrait of a bee eater
#BIRD# WILDLIFE#ACTION
 
Erik Simonic
28 days ago
 
Hi, I am vey new in bird photohraphy. I am interested in a technical critique about this photo, editing and capturing.
The image was taken with Nikon z8, and 180-600 lens with 1.4x TC at   1/6000,  iso 3200, f/9 

 
 
 

 

Lucie Gagnon CREW 
28 days ago — Senior critic
Erik Simonic PRO
 
Hi, I am vey new in bird photohraphy. I am interested in a technical critique about this photo, editing and capturing.
The image was taken with Nikon z8, and 180-600 lens with 1.4x TC at   1/6000,  iso 3200, f/9 

 
 
 

 

Hello Erik Simonic and welcome to the Critique Forum.

That is a beautiful photo of a Bee Eater! Such gorgeous colours!  You captured well its beautiful wings in good light! You did a fine job for someone who is new to Bird Photography! I would be very happy to have taken that image! 

So here are a few things I would suggest : I don't know if you cropped the image at all but what I would suggest to have a wider frame to give more "breathing space" to the bird. 

So I tried that on your image, increasing the canvas and filling in the area with the Fill Selection option in PhotoShop. I then cropped the image in a 5x7 format landscape mode and tilted the image a little so that the branch is in the bottom right corner.

Then I adjusted the details with Nik Color Efex Pro.

I opted for making the sky blue by painting over the white section and then using Gaussian Blur to blend it with the surrounding greens. 

I also adjusted the Levels a little bit.

And then I denoised the image with Topaz Denoise AI. BTW, you would have been able to lower the ISO by using a lower shutter speed, like 1/4000 instead of 1/6000. 

You could also lighten a little some of the darker green areas. I didn't do it but it is something to consider.

 

I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. 

 

Best regards,

Lucie, senior critic 

 

 

 

Edited: 28 days ago by Lucie Gagnon
 
Erik Simonic
28 days ago

All valid points, thanks for the input.

Yes I did crop the image, so I will extend to the more natural crop, and recheck the editing process to be more precise.